My review on this video is mixed I am afraid Rik. Though it's not all bad, I did find at times the narration was sometimes lost with not so much the sound of the locos and the livestock, but more I feel with perhaps at times to much narration during the introduction of the loco at the beginning of the scene. The first shot is a perfect example Rik. Somehow the narration was taking into the scene and I was transported to the world of 16mm. The whole experience of listening to a voice that has such a calming effect to a video that gives it even more life gives one a different view on how videos should be made. Unfortunately most of us don't have voices that are well suited to narration, mine for instance makes me sound old. Hold on a minute I am old.... I did like seeing parts of your line that I haven't seen also. The flora for one, is something maybe you could show a bit more and tell those of us (me) that are not that well up on greenery and what their relevant names are.
There is more I could say Rik, but generally your video was excellent. I did like the way you spoke, you are a natural with the some very interesting stories about life at Peckforton.
More please if you will. I am going to give you a score of 8 1/2 out of 10....
PS. Instead of speaking at the time of recording, I presume you do. Can you not do a VoiceOver like they do on documentaries after you have made the video.
Is that possible
PPS. I hope you don't take offence of my review Rik.
It's meant with good intentions....
that has the canal water coloured red because of the iron seems that where mined. 
